Robert M. Pirsig
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Every other head coach at Wake Forest also took a 10% pay cut. would be clear.
Every other head coach at Wake Forest also took unique pay cuts, though that information has not been made available. would be clear.
Every other head coach at Wake Forest also took a pay cut, with [Coach #1] taking a 7% cut; [Coach #2] taking a 4% cut; and [Coach #3] taking a 2% cut. would be clear.
Every other head coach at Wake Forest also took a pay cut, though the varying salaries mean varying levels of cuts. could describe all of the above and is ambiguous.
Every other head coach at Wake Forest also took unique pay cuts, though that information has not been made available. would be clear.
Every other head coach at Wake Forest also took a pay cut, with [Coach #1] taking a 7% cut; [Coach #2] taking a 4% cut; and [Coach #3] taking a 2% cut. would be clear.
Every other head coach at Wake Forest also took a pay cut, though the varying salaries mean varying levels of cuts. could describe all of the above and is ambiguous.